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    i am not happy. sometimes i laugh, sometimes i'm high from fumes, sometimes i pretend.
    i am not coward. i simply maintain braincells.
    i am not unusual. i am what you would be if you were in my position.
    i am not mean. i am crying out for help.
    i am not weak. i simply need a boost once in a while.
    i am not emo. i am me.
    i am not crying. i am keeping myself from going insane.
    i am not you. i am not what you want me to be. i am not what i want to be. i am not brave. i am not blessed. i am not lucky. i am not ugly. i am not pretty. i am not deep. i am not what everyone thinks.








    I AM ME.
    If only you knew...

    How many tears I cried
    How many scars I have
    How much you hurt me
    How much you changed me
    How unhappy I was
    And that you gave me an expiration date
    And how young I was
    When I died

    Would you still have done it?

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    And the point of this was?
    Don't even bother.

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    i wouldn't expect you to get it. why don't you follow your own advice and not even bother with me like everyone outside of this website(besides my bf and best friend)
    If only you knew...

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    How unhappy I was
    And that you gave me an expiration date
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    When I died

    Would you still have done it?

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    Prtty good.
    Giving up doesn't always mean you're weak, sometimes it just means you are strong enough to let go.

    Belive in yourself. I know you can do it. You're amazing.

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    I get it. And it's exactly what I'm trying to get thorugh to people. Being myself is all I can do. So DON'T bother and see if we care.
    "So one day he found her crying
    Coiled up on the dirty ground,

    Her prince finally came to save her
    And the rest you can figure out
    But it was a trick,
    And the clock struck 12...
    "


    ...I won't forget you, Brandon... you will always be stronger than me.

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    I like this, it's almost a Poem if I'm correct? Or a sign or an order in some sense? I like the way you've written it. It shows self confidence. Like a "Shut up, I'm who I am, You cannot change me!" attitude. Which is good. That's a good approach on Life. Don't let anyone change the person you are. You are you and that shall never change, Your a great person, so Live up to it (:

    Hope this helped.

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    Typical "Emo" stuff. If you wrote this, I have seen the EXACT same concept on many of different sites.

    Edit: It wouldn't hurt you too much to use proper grammar. Even a capital the beginning of a sentence would do.
    Hint: "i" on its own is always a capital in English. Always.
    Last edited by Curse; 03-07-2010 at 07:43 PM.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Curse View Post
    Typical "Emo" stuff. If you wrote this, I have seen the EXACT same concept on many of different sites.

    Edit: It wouldn't hurt you too much to use proper grammar. Even a capital the beginning of a sentence would do.
    Hint: "i" on its own is always a capital in English. Always.
    this thread has nothing to do with you. and if i wanted to use proper grammar, i very well could. and btw, why are you wasting your time(which i'm sure is very precious to you) giving a 12 year old a grammar lesson on a website you dont like?
    If only you knew...

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    How much you hurt me
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    How unhappy I was
    And that you gave me an expiration date
    And how young I was
    When I died

    Would you still have done it?

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    Hold on there amigo.
    By posting this thread, you are automatically asking people (not directly) for their opinions. Its no harm to try and use proper grammar, who knows, it may even help you in school if you practice on the internet. Finally, Who said I didn't like this forum?

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    'Who' should not be capitalized. and the internet is my time away from school to be lazy. i have never not been on top honors. and i asked nothing of anyone
    If only you knew...

    How many tears I cried
    How many scars I have
    How much you hurt me
    How much you changed me
    How unhappy I was
    And that you gave me an expiration date
    And how young I was
    When I died

    Would you still have done it?

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